want some constructive.. ?? (noting offensive just my point)
Focus:
the focus is on her hand and right shoulder not her eyes. you need to switch and control your focus points manual and ensure the eye and the white is crisp..
Aperture:
perhaps too open your aperture for a studio environment as there is no background to blur anyway.. if you are with flash, shoot with aperture 11 or higher to get crisp pictures. the only areas you blurring are parts of her face (for studio environment)
Highlight flash is too straight down makes her head flat. change the angle and a larger flash to cover more of her hair (you should use a silver umbrella for this)
Background:
Very flat
Front Flash:
Wrong position as you can see reflections they dont match
Post work.
Warm the picture little and soften her hands and other skin, ensure the eyes are crisp and white (But this is personal)
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Thank you :)
nice picture nice model..
want some constructive.. ?? (noting offensive just my point)
Focus:
the focus is on her hand and right shoulder not her eyes. you need to switch and control your focus points manual and ensure the eye and the white is crisp..
Aperture:
perhaps too open your aperture for a studio environment as there is no background to blur anyway.. if you are with flash, shoot with aperture 11 or higher to get crisp pictures. the only areas you blurring are parts of her face (for studio environment)
Highlight flash is too straight down makes her head flat. change the angle and a larger flash to cover more of her hair (you should use a silver umbrella for this)
Background:
Very flat
Front Flash:
Wrong position as you can see reflections they dont match
Post work.
Warm the picture little and soften her hands and other skin, ensure the eyes are crisp and white (But this is personal)
Thank you for the tips MRST :)
Cheers!