@snakyy21: sure will mate, thank you. Just need to find a way, a way to enter the passion of writing.
@timebandit: yeah indeed. But I think some spices are missing. And I need to know what. :)
@LOL.XD: I bet you’re a 5th grader. Nothing is too long to read until it is interesting. I guess my story was not that compelling for you. I will try.
@britexpat: please if you can give me the reason I would have been blessed. Just don’t say you’re UGLY, say you’re ugly because….. :)
@alex brod: Thank you, though just the heading, maybe next time the whole story. :)
@mast kalandar : Thank you for your suggestions, will work on it. :)
@Thelonius: I’m not your age, grow up kiddo. :) Thank you though for predicting.
@Knight Returns: Thank you for opening up, will try the free offer when I’m in Dubai.
@Yasir_Kh: yes agree with you but if he is going to write a short story I guess it would be very very short. Maybe Once a upon a time, there was a boy. :P
@Blisteringbarnacles2007: can’t agree less with you. :) I am asking brit why I should not continue writing, because some dreams they cannot be true, so just wanted to know where I was not good enuff. :)
@timebandit: maybe because ur a timebandit. :)
@hassan555: Thank you. Will do. Maybe I’m not that good, but practice makes man perfect, right? :)
@Demeter : yes indeed it is. The characters in the stories are in their 16’s. :) Thank you.
@snakyy21: sure will mate, thank you. Just need to find a way, a way to enter the passion of writing.
@timebandit: yeah indeed. But I think some spices are missing. And I need to know what. :)
@LOL.XD: I bet you’re a 5th grader. Nothing is too long to read until it is interesting. I guess my story was not that compelling for you. I will try.
@britexpat: please if you can give me the reason I would have been blessed. Just don’t say you’re UGLY, say you’re ugly because….. :)
@alex brod: Thank you, though just the heading, maybe next time the whole story. :)
@mast kalandar : Thank you for your suggestions, will work on it. :)
@Thelonius: I’m not your age, grow up kiddo. :) Thank you though for predicting.
@Knight Returns: Thank you for opening up, will try the free offer when I’m in Dubai.
@Yasir_Kh: yes agree with you but if he is going to write a short story I guess it would be very very short. Maybe Once a upon a time, there was a boy. :P
@Blisteringbarnacles2007: can’t agree less with you. :) I am asking brit why I should not continue writing, because some dreams they cannot be true, so just wanted to know where I was not good enuff. :)
@timebandit: maybe because ur a timebandit. :)
@hassan555: Thank you. Will do. Maybe I’m not that good, but practice makes man perfect, right? :)
@Demeter : yes indeed it is. The characters in the stories are in their 16’s. :) Thank you.